• Title Page VO
 "The Story of Honk-Honk-Ashoo and Swella-Bow-Wow, written and illustrated by Ralph Cosentino, Published by Cruikshank & Wallace

• Dog Catcher Page VO -
The text says "A dog catcher..."  but the original narration says "The dog catcher..."  change "the" to "A"
• Have Grayson or similar voice say "No"

• Soda Pop Page -
 Have Grayson or similar Honk voice say "This little dog is marvelous!"

• Smarty Pants Page -
 Have Grayson or similar Honk voice say "mar...vel...ous!"

• Honk & Swella Page -
 Have Grayson or similar Honk voice say: "You are marvelous! That means you are really swell. Let's call you Swella-Bow-Wow!"

• Honk & Swella sleeping Page -
 Add "The end."  in narration voice after Honk snores.